just finished refining part1 a little bit and going to start taking this fairly seriously, or work on another project for a friend's story. He began to tell me of his plot for something, but i feel like the introduction was almost too quickly skipped past and could easily have a full length story dedicated to it. So I'm waiting on him to give me some more information so if i am to write the intro/prologue i can avoid making contradictions and also use foreshadowing. Should be interesting. Might scrap original project cuz after refining the intro ive grown really dissatisfied with it and would feel a fresh project might be a better course of action. I'm going to continue it for a bit and see where it goes, get some people's opinions and criticism. It probably sucks so much because ive been writing them when i was sleep deprived at 1-3 am.